Friday, 15 June 2012

Liam H's 5 sentence challenge.

I saw a large puppy that's brilliant at running.
I was blue so the teacher sent me home.
My sister is brilliant.
A blue train passed by.
Posted by at 14:09

2 comments:

  1. Mrs Skinner18 June 2012 at 09:16

    you've managed to put three of the words into one sentence Liam! I love the use of 'blue' as a mood. Very sophisticated writing. Thank you for spending time writing for 5SC!

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  2. Elaine Shaw (The Classroom Carousel)25 June 2012 at 00:50

    Hello Liam,

    Wow, your sentences are wonderful and so descriptive. My favourite is your first sentence that describes the puppy so well. You should be extremely proud of your efforts, Liam.

    Thank you for entering the 5 Sentence Challenge.

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